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NaruHina Secret Lovers: Ch 3 by Kioshi-Higure NaruHina Secret Lovers: Ch 3 by Kioshi-Higure

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Attention my dear readers! I have been encountering a problem and I just received word that other people have seen the same problem. For reasons that escape me browsers like google chrome won't load the PDF, the easiest fix i've found for this issue is to simply use a different browser. I used internet explorer and it doesn't have the problem chrome does. Sorry for any inconvenience!


Finally! the long awaited 3rd chapter of Secret Lovers is finally done. It was quite a challenge to out-do the earlier chapters, and find inspiration for it to stay lovey dovey as it should be :iconicameplz:
For people who don't quite understand my little jokes and the such in the story.
- The part where Hinata finishes her ramen before Naruto is a reference to one of the Omake endings(sorry that the video subs are in spanish) where Hinata wins a ramen eating contest haha.
- Unless it wasn't obvious, Ayame is protecting Naruto and Hinata from being embarassed by Teuchi...and Naruto is too dense to realize that he noticed that they're on a date haha
- "juho soshiken" is the name of Hinata's jutsu, it means "gentle step: twin lion fists", what Naruto said was "gentle step: twin tiger fists" or "juho sotoraken"
- For anyone who doesn't remember, in the anime Hinata looked at Naruto as he was sulking during the graduation day at the Academy. I tend to disregard the anime completely, except for this because Hinata hadn't been introduced in the manga when this happened, but I have a feeling she would've been watching either way.


In any case, the whole idea for this chapter was "awkward first date". Because let's face it guys, Naruto and Hinata are newbies at dating. It's also very much based off my own romantic experiences (as i have stated before). And well I have always liked shy girls, that's why I chose to let Hinata join in a little with the teasing and whatnot. And Naruto seems out of character because he is being more open about how he feels with her. If any of you recall he had a nice conversation with her when he was nervous about facing Neji in the chuunin exams. Their relationship is much more intimate in the official story, so I took from that and made them be more open with each other during their date...despite them still being unbelievably nervous haha.

And I can just see it now, I can see some people complaining that Hinata didn't faint and that Naruto is being too shy. 2 things:

1. Naruto IS very outspoken BUT he's not very open about his inner-most feelings, being in a more intimate relationship (Even if its a new found relationship) would make Naruto show his insecurity with Hinata. I speak from experience, that's how it went for me in real life
2. Hinata doesn't faint as much as people think she does, if I recall correctly she's fainted like 3 times, and only one was during shippuden. She's not insane guys, just cute and shy.


Chapter 1 (PDF version)
Chapter 2 (PDF version)
Chapter 3: ---

The preview image was used with permission of talent incarnated; :iconannria2002: (Original deviation)
go check out her gallery, her skills are just...:iconmegustaplz:


Naruto and Hinata and any other Naruto characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto (c)
Story belongs to me (c)

I would like to point out that this girl here :iconmini-misty224: is my editor, she is responsible for quality control of this story, and she has written and re-written many parts and dialogues of this story. Without her, Secret Lovers would NOT be what it is. give her much love
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KillerBee27 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  New member
When is the next chapter coming? This story is fantastic!
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daga000 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't get it. How I'm supposed to read this?
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Kioshi-Higure Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
it's a PDF, your browser should just open it. You may encounter some problems if you're using Safari or Internet explorer, and I'm not quite sure how well it reads if you're on mobile. Try opening it with chrome or firefox! that should do the trick my friend :)

If you have any more issues do let me know ok?
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daga000 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I guess it won't work on mobile
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Number1HinataFan2 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Right under the favorites button, there is a download button. Press that on your mobile and you can read it ^^
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socorro333 Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
omg i keep falling in love with your story with each new chapter! i absolutely love how detailed and realistic you make it! please please please say you're going to continue!! :iconawwwplz:
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Kioshi-Higure Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I am I really am, I haven't written much of the 4th chapter in a long time and I'm really sorry with everyone waiting for a next chapter, I try to be constant with it but well college gets in the way haha. Like I said, there is already a chapter 4 and a layout for chapter 5, I just haven't written much of them in a while sorry :P

AND AS A MESSAGE TO EVERYONE WHO LIKES THIS STORY, I AM CONTINUING IT, IT IS MOSTLY WRITTEN BUT WIDELY UNEDITED SO SORRY FOR SO MUCH DELAY
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socorro333 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :icon34nipahplz:
hehe. omg im so happy you're continuing!! 
and omg no worries,i  absolutely get it. college totally drains all your time!!! it's all the papers, exams and work you have to do. >w<
so yep yep, take your time and make sure to get all your school work done! that's the most important! I will be here waiting for your next chapter! yay~!!! :)
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daily-happiness Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
I just love this story <3 I hope that you'll write more :D
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Kioshi-Higure Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
yes yes i will, i've just had to deal with college a lot and well i'm moving soon to canada as well, i have had a bit of issue trying to write wortwhile material for the fanfic, but like i answered another comment, the 4th chapter is in the works and 5th chapter is already layed out, i'm actually planning to write atleast 10 chapters so don't worry ok?
thank you for enjoying my work!
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